Under the bed

Walt: we are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing.

Chapter 1

The look out

Once upon a time there lived a boy named jaykim. One day he came back from school 

and he heard a scary sound up in his room he slowly went up to his room and there was nothing but a voice

popped up under his bed. He slowly looked down under his bed and he saw a scary monster under his bed

Jaykim cried for help but there was no one to help him. The monster came out from under the bed and he did a

terrible thing to jaykim he talked to him about his life listening to him every night and they became friends but

Jaykim’s worst enemy saw the monster and jes what he did he called the cops on the monster. When they were

talking Jaykim heard the cops coming inside Jaykim said to the monster to go under the bed again so they

didn't find him and then the cops barded in. Jaykim said acting what are you doing here !!! and the cops said

don’t act dumd where is the monster boy Jaykim tried to not tell the cops but he said the monster is in the

washing machine that's where he is and the cop said thank you. But then he ran out side as far as he could then

he saw the monster jumped out of his bedroom window and they were hiding for 3 days from now on.the next

day the monster said i know where to go. Then they went to monster college it was a school that was full of

monsters like garloilis, huge bats with four wings something like that and when they just got in there all of the

monsters were looking at them and wondering who are they what are they doing here and this was funny

Jaykim’s friend said hi we are from an athere ilaland far far away and he was trying to speak in hand lougus to

them one of the girls from the school said are you from earth or something?.he said yes we are please don’t eat

me i mean no harm to you guys and then the girl should them around the school there minds were blown away

for how big the school was and monster and Jaykim was not scared but his friend was scared of them and

every time they got in a portal to go somewhere they ended up in the wrong places. One day a terrible thing

happened at the school when everyone was asleep a very bed monster came in the school and his name was the

dark killer.it was a type of monster that ate all other monster’s and it ate the new girl could amilya she came

here 3 days ago before we came here. We were so sad to see her blood on the floor. When they got back to

earth were and Jaykim’s father were lining on the floor in his room he ran to them he shouted no !!! the rain

was falling and tears were dropping Jaykim said to himself im going to kill  the agarly monster in a sad and

hungry way he was very very mad. One day Jaykim said i will find you and kill you.

The end.

this is a work i have written and edit myself.

this is still a work in progress.

it was very hard because i didn't know how to spell words right and it was hard doing the work.

what kind of story would you do.